I'm trying to get more comments/feedback for my work at FF. net. I go by the penname Kikoken and Joey Wheeler is one of my favorite Yugioh character. I need some dedicated reviewers, preferably people who go to FF.net every day. I recently started rewriting my story A Strange Crush, of which had lots of reviews in the past. I want to know how the rewrite is going so I can keep working on it.